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Her presentation deals with teenagers as targets of Internet (Risks and Beneficial effects)
It was cut into two parts which are first risks and secondly beneficial effects.

First of all, teenagers are the most exposed and displayed to predators on the web.
Indeed, young people are really interested in Internet because they can interact and communicate with their friends, family or with others as a rule. Moreover, they like chat in instant message, play online and take part in competitions or opinion polls.
Hence they give some personal information to strangers in instant messaging or during their registration in web sites and consequently their private life is exposed on the web.

It exists others risks which are sometimes more hazardous as attacks, the danger to meet sexual predators which is contributed by anonymity. There are as well games of chance. These one are become an addiction more important than cigarettes, alcohol or drugs.

Nevertheless, Internet has also beneficial effects.
Indeed, any information can be found on the web. In addition, there are several websites which are aimed by teachers. Thus, Internet helps children with learning difficulties. What's more, people can stay in contact or play with others people of whole world.

To conclude, Internet is a very interesting tool when it is used with intelligence.